This was odd; Prussia's odd multiplicity is at times a little distracting with them both in this tale and in a small room, no less. It's probably just me - literary conceits get stuck in my teeth sometimes, like spinach. XD The Crown Prince Fritz is just adorable as an abused youngster trying to be a proper little man, again this was just so real and immersing. I love these tales - it actually makes me a little sad they can't be published. Perhaps you should illustrate them...?
... you know, in all the spare time none of us have! LOL
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Date: 2013-03-11 08:44 pm (UTC)The Crown Prince Fritz is just adorable as an abused youngster trying to be a proper little man, again this was just so real and immersing. I love these tales - it actually makes me a little sad they can't be published. Perhaps you should illustrate them...?
... you know, in all the spare time none of us have! LOL
Loved it; keep it up, please!