kiramaru7: (chibi!Prussia2)
This past weekend I went to Virginia Beach with my family. My sister couldn't make it & even though we were sad she wasn't there, we still had a good time. I hobbled along with my busted foot/ankle to the beach, which was way too hard & painful the day we got there as it was boiling hot. XD My parents did gt me a camping chair to sit in, so I sat & read. Then hobbled back. T.T Our seafood dinner that night was awesome! :D The next day, we did an easy nature trail, which was nice. I'm amazed that these peeps let their kids jump off their boat & splash around & climb on the bank in water moccasin territory. XD And yes, we did see one on the trail that slithered on by in front of us! o.0 Lunch was crappy McDonald's & you know it's bad when they get the orders wrong & peeps come in off the drive through to yell at the manager. We had more seafood for dinner. XD The next day was another nature trail through some wetlands. We saw a beautiful little bird called a redstart. *LAUGHS* The bird was mostly grey with yellow spots on its wings & tail. XD https://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/American_Redstart/id

Lunch was better at Wendy's, but dinner was at this Italian place & while my meatballs were tasty & biggish (I could only eat 2 out 3), the spaghetti I ordered to go with it was dry & burnt tasting. XD I ate it, but didn't enjoy it. I did have fun that afternoon watching some crows playing. We were on the top floor of the hotel (floor 14) & they would jump off the top of the building like lil cliff jumpers, with wings held out to catch the breeze. Even the seagulls were riding the wind. :D The crows were too funny! They also harassed some ospreys, trying to make them drop their catch. We also saw a bald eagle fly by! I've seen them on the Island near where I live & I've also seen them fishing at Connowengo (sp?) dam, but never on the beach! XD

While we were there, they had an end of summer festival on the boardwalk, which was cool. The one night we walked around a bit, saw The Ambassadors, who played some awesome reggae! They were playing outside in this lil area outside a fried chicken place. (It was for peeps to eat outside instead of inside.) at first there was just us & a couple of other peeps, but they soon had nice crowd inside the eating area & out on the street watching them. Peeps were even dancing along! Other bands were playing too, up & down the board walk as part of the festival. There were food vendors, crafters, peeps selling all sorts of stuff. :D We could see & hear the music from our balcony.

The last day was spent at the aquarium. We even wandered onto their lil nature trails, but all we saw was some sort of raptor that was silhouetted, so it was hard to tell exactly what it was (probably an osprey), a couple of crabs & a ton of lil snails that made the reeds look like pussy-willows. It was a marsh area. We also saw some skinny7 squirrels. XD They probably weren't skinny, they were just normal sized, unlike the fat & sassy ones that like to empty my bird-feeders. XD

I liked the aquarium & the wetlands trail, where we saw a water moccasin curled up under the brush along the water bank & the one we saw swimming! Dang! That thing swam like it was trying to be the next Michael Phelps! o.0 We also saw a Heron, the redstart, what I call "flying spiders" (They're HUGE & they hang their webs between trees, so they look like they're hovering in midair. XD), a wolf spider that I thought was a lil tree frog until it came out onto the leaf (I don't knwo what you call it, but it's some kind of tall grass that grows around the cattails), a pretty lil spider with jewels on its abdomen. The food at the aquarium was good too. We had fish & chips, except it seems peeps they eat their fish with tater sauce. YUCK! XD So no vinegar, but I did improvise & snagged a packet of Newman's Own lite Italian. That tends to be a bit on the vinegary side, so it worked in a pinch. :D

And because I didn't have access to my compy, I want to wish those on my f-list who celebrate, a happy, healthy, and sweet New Year!

Rosh-Hashanah-greetings

*is home*

Aug. 26th, 2016 03:55 pm
kiramaru7: (chibi!Prussia2)
I'm back from my trip to Vegas. Gave back all the money I won playing slots. XD I feel like crap. I'm not sure if cuz I barely slept on the red-eye home, or I picked something up. XD It was miserably HOT there, but a miracle happened. It actually rained there! o.0 And I mean RAIN!! We came out of a restaurant & there was a lil sprinkle & next thing we knew it was POURING. XD Bad news about that is there were places that were flooded, cuz they couldn't handle the rain. I also thought I saw that Kardashian idiot with the HUGE arse. XD She was at the pool in a skin tight dress, was only there for a few minutes, before leaving. She did ahve a store in the Mirage where I was staying, so who knows. If it wasn't her, there's someone else out there with a HUGE arse, the poor thing. XD I also went to see the Cirque du Soliel (sp?) show "Ka." it was really good! :D

I also started reading "Game of Thrones." It's pretty good, I like the large cast of characters & how each chapter was devoted to a single character's POV of the events that were happening around them. I really enjoy the chapters about Tyrion. He's a hoot! :D I'm also a bit disappointed that Jon Snow is not really a main character. I remember when the series first came out, there was all this fanart of him. XD Oh well. *shrugs* What I don't like about it, is George R.R. Martin's way of hitting the reader over the head with things. Good characters are GOOD, while evil characters are EVIL, this could be why I like Tyrion, as so far, I'm only 2/3 of the way through the first book in the series, he comes across as neither good nor evil. He's sassy, which at times gets him in trouble, and other times he's serious & I think he's the most real of the characters so far. The other thing I don't like is how the man over describes something to the point where I wonder if he's being paid by the word. >.> That's got me skimming parts & I'm sure I've missed something important. ^^; And then there's his over use of the words "and" & "then." ;p So we get these long run-ons that would have been better with a few commas & periods. Again, I wonder if the man gets paid by the word. ;p Seriously, while "ands" are important, & you need them, "thens" not so much. I came across one sentence, where it felt like there was a million "ands" & I know there was 2 "thens" in it. At that point, I wondered if he accidentally sent in his rough draft for publication. ;p If I'm "pinking" a PUBLISHED book as I'm reading, there's a serious issue there. XD So will I keep reading? Yeah, the bones are good & maybe, just maybe, they'll either stop paying him by the word, or his editor will grow a set & tell him to fix his shit. ;p Somehow I doubt it. XD Now to hunt down the series & watch it online, since I don't have HBO or whatever fancy channel (pay extra for) it's on & see how the show compares to the book. But what about spoilers? I have no problem with them, when I CHOOSE to spoil myself, it's only when they're unexpected, it bothers me. XD Anyway, as someone who writes for fun, what I take away from this is this: a) watch my sentence structure, b) don't hit readers over the head with stuff, whether it's describing someone's looks (once should be enough, maybe a handful more if it's an epic with a large cast) or their clothes, c) if it's important keep it in, but don't bury it in nonsense, d) try to write characters that feel real; no one is truly EVIL, nor are they truly GOOD, e) women are not all whores, queens/princesses, crazy, or stupid/foolish, f) for every nekid woman, there should be a nekid man, in other words, don't throw in gratuitous nudity just cuz you can, especially when you treat your female characters so poorly in other respects.

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